AHS English Stylebook

EXPOSITORY PARAGRAPH CONCLUSION MODEL 

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The following model uses the technique of "Echoing the Introduction."  Here the student alludes to the Interest Creating Device at the paper's beginning.  First, read the opening of her essay:
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At the end of this essay, note how the student crafts a conclusion that "echoes" the I.C.D., expanding and deepening her introduction:
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Such an "echoing/deepening" conclusion ends the entire paragraph by enriching it.  Whatever your concluding device, it should go beyond summary, if possible, and make the whole paragrpah more significant.